Critique website thehomeglo.com Idk why not convert. Thx submitted by /u/ToasterTerminator246

Please be brutally honest and critique my ecom website. I recently launched an American tactical brand built around my invention: the Trigger Ring. As a cop, many of my co-workers have bought one and love both the product and the website. However, I have yet to make a sale or get feedback from someone outside my personal network. The Trigger Ring is patent-pending, and sales will help determine wheth…

Could I get your critique on my offer negotiation email? Hi, ER nurse here applying for a behavioral health position. They asked my expectation, I told them $40 which matches my current salary. I received the offer today for $35. Which is more in line with FT employment for nurses in my area (and even low for that). Any tips on responding to HR’s offer letter? This is what I have (that I’ve borrowed…

Critique my packages Hey there, I’m new to the SMM but not new to comms consulting. My background is in corporate communications, but I am looking to dip my toe into this area. I drafted three packages for a local bakery I’m going to pitch. What do you think? Thanks, all! Bronze – $400 (three-month minimum) – Monthly 30-minute strategy and brainstorming call – Mont…

Critique my account! What am I doing wrong that I should improve? Hey guys, I’m a 21-year-old self-taught programmer and AI enthusiast. I had to leave my bachelors halfway due to personal tragedy back in Nov 2023. Since then I’ve been self studying programming and machine learning. After recovering from the bad times, I wondered, what if I document this journey by posting every day? I turned the idea into a da…

9 day Vietnam itinerary critique Hi guys, I’ll be visiting Vietnam for 9 days in April from Hyderabad (India). Please critique my itinerary: Friday night ✈️ from hyd to Hanoi Saturday morning bus from Hanoi to Sa Pa, reach Sa Pa by noon. Check in and chill. Sunday and Monday 2 days Sa Pa explore. Tuesday morning checkout and take bus/train to Hanoi. Reach Hanoi in the evening…

Please critique my savings plan as a confused 24 year old Hi! I started my first corporate job in 2024 and here is the split of my paycheck I have been doing. Gross salary – $85k Monthly $ in – $4600 after taxes Monthly saving structure – 401k – $850 HYSA – $1000 (i have a very hefty emergency fund in place, so i guess im just saving this money for car, future house, vacations??) Roth IRA – maxing out …

Please critique my ecom website We launched a functional womens’ clothing brand a month ago, and so far we’ve been getting good responses about the product from friends and family. However, we still have yet to find our first “true customer” (i.e. someone we don’t know). We’ve just started running ads and do social media posts, looking into influencers as well. We design and p…

Help critique budget – first job out of grad school Hi all, Looking for critique on my estimated budget for 2025. This is my first job out of grad school and first time paying real taxes, contributing to HSA/401k etc. Also could use help verifying my estimating taxes (I used ChatGPT). I live in a VHCOL area with a roommate. https://imgur.com/a/ZgVjv4E submitted by /u/Particular_Passage19 …

Critique my Makeshift Itinerary for Peru Context: I plan on going to Peru in May, and my trip will likely be 10-12 days. I’m traveling with one bag, staying in hostels, and eating cheaply. I want to schedule as little as possible so that I have the freedom to do whatever I feel like at the moment, so this itinerary is more general in terms of places I want to make sure I get to at some…

Critique itinerary for 6 weeks in Malaysia We are planning to be in Malaysia from mid March to end of April. Context – we have been traveling for 6 months so longer stays in places / not moving around too much is important to us. – 2 weeks in Penang (longer than usual as we need to pick one spot where we can take care of logistics for the next leg of our trip, relax a bit more etc. Picke…

Seeking makeup critique Product List: Milk Sculpt Stick in “Toasted” on the nose only. Blended with fingers. -Elf Expert Liquid Eyeliner in “Jet Black.” Top lid only. -NYX Jumbo Eye Pencil in “Black Bean” on the upper water line and “Milk” on the bottom water line. -Juvia’s Place Culture Pallette in “Boronu” on upper lids only. Lorac PRO Pallette NOIR, shade “Wh…

Critique my Final Draft itinerary for Andalusia Spain Hello Everyone, I’m finalizing my itinerary for Andalusia, Spain, and wanted to share what I have so far: Arrive in Seville 4 nights in Seville (with a potential day trip to Córdoba, depending on how I feel) Pick up a car and head to Ronda 4 nights in Ronda to explore the white villages (Setenil, Zahara, Olvera, Arcos de la Frontera) and pos…

please critique my makeup Hi!! I’m just starting to get back into makeup and I was hoping you guys could give me some tips/tricks? I’ve attached some pictures of my recent looks Thank you loves! submitted by /u/Pinkunicorn1313

Can you guys critique my edit? (be as harsh as you’d like) submitted by /u/Vibin_Entity

Critique My Africa Trip I’m looking to plan an Africa trip for my family (3 brothers 30 years old, 2 parents in late 60s). Here’s what I’ve planned: Leave mid September Fly into Nairobi and quickly transfer to Kilamanjaro Airport 6 Days guided hiking to Kilamanjaro (link) Fly Kilamanjaro to Kigali, Rwanda 4 Day Gorilla & Golden Monkey tour in Rwanda (link) Fly Kigali,…

Itinerary critique – France Planning our first trip to France for this Christmas. Our itinerary looks like this: Land in Paris on 17 dec afternoon – stay in Paris till 21 dec morning. 17 Dec evening – wander about, Luxembourg gardens maybe Getting a 2 day museum card to cover louvre, musee d’orsay, centre pompidou, Saint Chappelle, Arc d triomphe, etc. To do this on 18…

Please critique my makeup.. I feel as if I’m missing something No foundation No primer Lise watier CC cream in fair Patrick Starr O/S blush in attention seeker and Phat ass Nyx chubby liner in white Rare beauty mascara in black Clinique eyeshadow in sugar cookie Kim chi beauty highlighter in pearl gone wild Tower 28 blush in happy hour Mac fix plus setting spray submitted by /u/mtnbikingvampwitch

Please critique my budget for moving out of my parents house Income: $16/hour, 40 hours a week After taxes and deductions: $800 biweekly, $1600 monthly Monthly expenses Room for rent: $750 Gas for car: $160 Therapy: $200 Car insurance: $60 Groceries, Household Supplies, Toiletries, Eating Out: $300 Apple Music: $10 Google Play Storage: $2 iCloud Storage: $1 Extra money: $117 I hit my deductible for the ye…

Critique my website for a product I just launched Built using woocommerce/wordpress https://jarva.co/ Seems to be converting well so far would love some feedback. This is a cold brew coffee product I recently launched submitted by /u/pow-wow20