Critiques please and how do I improve my mistakes?
Critiques please and how do I improve my mistakes? https://preview.redd.it/6fflkwzofnnb1.jpg?width=1872&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=3b68e7cc41b8bd8af0a0bfd8e84133e9a4fa5a38
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